Jack said to Annie, "Look at that what I found".

Annie already was gone to the hilltop.

She was busy picking up the magnolia flower from the tree.

She was going to down the hill clutching magnolia flowers.

There were filled with nests.

Annie was crouched next to one of the nests.

The big dinosoure was staring at Annie.

Jack said to Annie crawled.

And bow her head, pretending chew.

The ugly monster came here across the plain.

It was walking two big legs.

It was Tyrannosaurus rex.

Jack and Annie ran down the hill and came in front of the tree house through Pteranodon.

But Jack put his pack on the hilltop.

He ran to the hilltop again.

Tyrannosaurus was appeared again.

Jack hide to back of the tree.

Annie told Pteranodon, "Bring back Jack to me."

Pteranodon ride Jack on his back.

Jack slipped off on Pteranodon's back.

Pteranodon took off to the sky again.

Jack and Annie made a wish, " I wish go back to Frog Creek."

They were come back to home.

They peeked off the window. Outside was exactly same view.

They were came back to Frog Creek Woods again.

틀린 문장이나 수정되어야 할 문장들은 어디서 교정 받을 곳이 있는가요?ㅎ

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